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一篇原文改写三篇不同的文章,需要改写内容为:
第一篇 revised version:
My name is Yu Geqin. I'm nine years old. There are three members in my family: my father, my mother, and me.
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My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of our family. He can solve difficult problems, too.
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My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is a worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.
We have a happy family. We like it very much.
第二篇 revised version:
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister, and me.
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My father likes reading. My mother likes cooking. They both work in Leliu. They always go to work by car. They work hard.
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My sister and I are pupils. I study in the primary school affiliated with Shunde No.1 Middle School. My hobby is collecting coins.
- My sister studies in Xishan Primary School. She likes watching TV. We love our family very much.
第三篇 revised version:
Here's a more detailed version of my family life:
My name is Yu Geqin, and I'm nine years old. Our family consists of three siblings: father, mother, and me.
- My father works as a teacher. He’s always dressed in stylish glasses and is very hardworking all day long. He’s the smartest person in our family.
- My mother looks beautiful with her bright eyes and long black hair. She’s a kind worker who makes good food for everyone.
Our family has a lot of fun together. We like playing games, going to the park, and watching stories on TV. I’m always curious about new things and can learn everything quickly.
My sister is also my friend. She studies in another school but she shares many hobbies with me. Together, we’re always happy. We love our family because it makes us feel so good knowing that someone loves us.
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